But will I actually sketch in cafes? Maybe.
I really love how you capture the movement of the forms; it gives your drawings a great sense of energy and and excitement and helps better define the actions of the people. The thick black outlines in the first page are especially effective in defining the overall motion of the body's biggest forms, and I'm curious to see how they would look if applied to the more complicated poses on the second page.
I'm really enjoying the first page. I love seeing the messy underdrawing if I look closely, but when I step back I don't see it as much and only the smoothing form. I'm always so scared of being messy but I'm going to need to learn how to for this class lol.
I enjoy the emotion and flow that are expressed in these sketches, it adds a lot to the character of your drawings. Your line variation is also nice, it adds more interest into your work. I would love to see how you would have handled the expressions of the people on the second page.
There is defenetly a lot of structure to your work. I think you've done a really good job of keeping everything anatomically correct. However I think you should try loosening up just a little bit. I'd like to see some more emphasis on those curves, Otherwise you're doing a great job.